В общем у меня случился приступ вдохновения (иначе это никак не назвать) и я второй день пытаюсь описать сюжет фильма Тор в лимериках. (
Краткая информация о Лимериках для тех, кто не в курсе, что это). Не знаю даже, насколько хорошо получается, но все же решила выложить на суд читателей то, что можно назвать "началом". Если понравится - продолжение следует)
На самом деле автор вполне неплохо знает англ.яз, но в некоторых местах чтобы сохранить хотя бы подобие рифмы несоблюдена грамматика в виде артиклей и порядка слов.часть разI'm going to tell you a story,
I hope you're not going to sorry.
You may sit down a chair,
And popcorn may prepare,
And be ready to listen the story.
In the Asgard there was an old king,
He was strong and he screamed like a wind.
He had two pretty sons,
Who were his own suns,
But as dad he was worse than as king.
His first son had blue eyes and blond hair,
And he was Odin's favourite heir.
His name sounds Thor,
He belived in a war,
And the war should be clearly fair.
But Thor's brother was totally different,
And we couldn't call him really innocent.
He was tricky and sly,
But sometimes he was shy:
Odins's son didn't like to speak in a rant.
Odin granted to Thor magic hammer,
Loki waited it as much as brother.
He was happy and proud,
And he told so his brother,
And they happily smiled to each other.
But Thor thought he was better than dad,
And he made his mum feel very sad.
He declared the war
To ice-giants, and more
He made All-Father really mad.
tbcUPD. У меня, наконец-то, дошли руки-ноги, чтобы дописать историю. Не скажу, что поэтический шедевр, но я старалась.
часть дваKing decided to punish his heir.,
He did smth he thought would be fair.
He took powers in ire
And threw Mjölnir away
And he sent powerless son somewhere.
At that time Odin's second con Loki
Found out his lineage story.
He is son of Lafey;
Was kidnepped in one day
During war very dark, very gory.
Loki didn't like news what he heard
And he screamed at All-Father alot.
And new troubles begin
Odin fell in the dream.
Loki took throne without a thought.
On the earth Thor's first feeling was pain
After that he met girl whose name's Jane
She took him to ER
He escaped very fast,
And he told his main secret to Jane.
Thor decided to get Mjölnir back,
So he tried to do one funny track.
He passed half of the way
Still belived in his fate
But he couldn't get his hammer back.
After that Loki visited brother
And he lied him about their father.
He left Thor with his thoughts
And attended ice-lords,
And suggested them murder his father.часть триAt that time Thor's friends Warriors Three
Came to Earth, it was funny to see.
Loki didn't like that,
He sent killer (so sad!)
To destroy or to make brother plea.
They all tried to tear killer apart
But it was too unreal, too hard.
Thor came closer to it
So he could do a hit.
Mjölnir moved and Thor played his best card.
At that time jötunns came to Asgard
Lafey tried to kill Odin (oh God!)
Loki used fathers staff
Killed Lafey, gave a laugh.
And his mother gave him heartfelt hug.
Thor came home and appeared in room
And said: Mum, Loki full of a doom!
They began a big fight,
Each one thought he was right.
Weapons crossed with a terrible boom.
Thor used hammer, his bro - magic staff.
Power equal, sheet-anchor is luck.
Thor destroyed Rainbow Bridge
Odin caught them on ledge.
Loki cried and fell down into dark.
I just told you my favourite story
And I hope you're not very sorry.
If you want to know more
About Loki and Thor
You should watch "The Avengers" new story.
Fin?
@темы:
поэзия,
юмор,
Один,
Локи,
G,
Тор
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07.12.2011 в 22:04и, кажется, размера )))
Но не суть))) Мне так понравилось, просто
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07.12.2011 в 23:05Nemi, ну да, с размером в паре мест есть косяки, но там надо читать наверное скороговоркой быстро, чтобы в размер попасть) а в целом старалась придерживаться рифмы. Хотя пара строчек у меня ну никак не получались и до сих пор не нравятся.
Продолжу, разумеется) Спасибо!
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08.12.2011 в 10:26Проду, please!
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